Friday, 26 September 2014

My persuasive writing about there should be no school uniform

Dear Mr Bob


Think .Think back to your school days. Did you like your school uniform? Not many people did so I want to get rid of the school uniform.

Firstly they take time. Every Morning you’re rushing around trying to get your school uniform ready. Well what if you didn't have school uniform you could get into any old clothes also ,you have to wash them every second day wash wash wash wash wash that's all you do, well mum does.


Secondly it is also easy to get into normal clothes instead of looking for your uniform most mornings .You could just get into some clothes like if it was cold you could get some track pants on, but no we are not allowed to because it is not school uniform. Also you can be who you want to be. You can express your self, like lets just say you like chocolate you could wear a top with a chocolate bar on it .


Finally they cost to much the jersey it is $115. That is A LOT of money for people that aren't that rich also if you lost it you have to buy a new one that is another $115 and what if the shop was closed you will get in trouble for not wearing the correct school uniform.  


In conclusion there should be no school uniform in schools it is itchy, expensive, uncomfortable and annoying to wash every second day.

Thank you

From Mark




Friday, 12 September 2014

Social dancing it was the shalala


In reading we are doing literature circles.My group are reading charlie and the great class elevator and i am the summariser. here is my summary


Charlie has now landed on the space hotel of the USA. They are talking to the president of the USA. The president thinks they want to blow up the space hotel but they don’t they accidentally went up into space and found it and wanted to land on it. So they are inside the space hotel and the president is talking. Mr Wonka is saying random stuff he said Venus and mars so the president thought that they were from there. So the president asked them to come down and they will look after them but Mr Wonka thought that if we go down there they will recognized them. So they decided not to go then grandma Georgina started screaming and in the elevator there was a nasty brown animal then the chapter finished the end .